志愿者工作英語(yǔ)作文

　　志愿者工作英語(yǔ)作文
　　
　　作文一：Volunteer work is necessary
　　
　　郭昕碩
　　
　　河北省衡水市衡水中學(xué)高三3班
　　
　　There is no doubt that volunteer work in China has been brought into focus throughout the world. We presented so much last year, which indeed gave the world a big surprise. Our spirits, our merits, everything we showed during the grand gathering and the disaster proved that volunteer work is necessary.
　　
　　As far as I am concerned. The work of helping others without payment can be of great benefit for individuals. Apart from the experience, the progress we make during the process is enough. Time permitting, we can take more responsibility outside the school and gain the pleasure.
　　
　　Everyone builds our society. With the economical development, we are no longer worry about our essential needs in our life. Therefore, tospare more time and to give others a helping hand can just be the right choice. Only by this means can we get to know each other better and make contributions to our society.
　　
　　Moreover, it is certain that there are still so many developing countries all over the world. From Ethiopia to DPRK, too many people are in badly demand of help. Our gerosity and warth means a lot. Furthermore, organization of all kinds about volunteer work will surely accelerate the process.
　　
　　Taking the above-mentioned factors into consideration. Raising our owareness and be helpful can definitely be so necessary. The connection between us must be permanent with our efforts of volunteer work. Therefore volunteer work is not only a political world, but a lively work related to you and me. So it stands to reason that volunteer work is necessary.
　　
　　專家建議：
　　
　　建議作者多閱讀整篇的英語(yǔ)文章，增強(qiáng)自己的“篇章感”,因?yàn)樵谠撈�文章中存在的�?wèn)題主要是段落見(jiàn)缺乏緊密聯(lián)系，所以造成各段之間的孤立感的形成，建議作者以后寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意段落間的合理過(guò)渡。
　　
　　專家點(diǎn)評(píng)：
　　
　　整體結(jié)構(gòu)很好，尤其第一段開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山的明確了文章的主題，給讀者非常好的第一印象。唯一不足的是第三段與上文的銜接很生硬，并且沒(méi)有段落主題句，會(huì)影響文章整體的邏輯感。另外，有個(gè)別句子出現(xiàn)表意不明的現(xiàn)象，單詞拼寫(xiě)也存在問(wèn)題，所以希望以后寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意細(xì)節(jié)。
　　
　　作文二：Volunteer work: an unique lesson
　　
　　刁文卿
　　
　　遼寧省大連市大連市第十二中學(xué)高二9班
　　
　　With the rapid development of techndogy（technology） and communication in our society, the sense of competitiveness and cooperation filled our mind steadily. At the same time, the owarness（awareness） of helping others in people's mind also became stronger and stronger. This situation led to the start of a new “job”―volunteer.
　　
　　We just found from the passage that the increasing number of the vdunteer（volunteer） touched all the people home and abroad. And I argue the point that volunteer work plays an integral part in our daily life especially for the youth in China.
　　
　　First and foremest（foremost）， nowadays, parents can only have one child and he or she may be given the best care of the other members in the family. As a consequence, the only clild（child） may become selfish and self-centered unconciously（unconsciously）。
　　
　　The volunteer work, as a special lessons can help the youngster put the other people's feeling before theirs and ask for their opinion before taking actions.(m.panasonaic.com) Second volunreer（volunteer） work is not only a training of do others a favour but a process of improving your cooperation ability as well.
　　
　　Last but not least, volunteer work is an unique lesson that we cant（cannot） get in our school. Former leader Jiangzemin said: the main goal in education is making students more creative and helping them reach their full potential. And in my poirt（point） view, it is volunteer work which can help them reach their full potential but not our school lessons. This kind of pratical practise can make us know more about what is going on in our society and in the world, for instance, the May 12 earthquake in wenchuan and the wonderful 2008 Beijing Olympic Game and so on.
　　
　　All the evidence discussed in the above awalysis the points to my conclusion that volunteer work is an unique lesson for our teenagers as it make us know more. do more and think more. And I believe that the accumulation of volunteer will rising rapily and it will lead our country to a brighter future.
　　
　　專家建議：
　　
　　寫(xiě)完作文后，自己通讀一遍，這樣會(huì)減少些不必要的拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，建議多學(xué)過(guò)的詞組造句，這樣表達(dá)會(huì)更豐富，也可以多看些優(yōu)秀范文。
　　
　　專家點(diǎn)評(píng)：
　　
　　文章表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)言較好，但結(jié)構(gòu)有些不清晰，第二點(diǎn)在文章中沒(méi)有展開(kāi)說(shuō)。時(shí)態(tài)用的有些混亂。總體不錯(cuò)。
　　
　　作文三：Volunteer Life
　　
　　代昱丞
　　
　　遼寧省本溪市高級(jí)中學(xué)高二15班
　　
　　As we know, “volunteer” is a kind of “work” that you offer to do it, and also, it is for free.
　　
　　From schools to shops, from Olympics to world wars, volunteers are everywhere. And to Chinese people, last year is an impresive（impressive） year because of volunteers. In May 12 earthquake and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Gams, volunteers played a really important role. They touched every Chinese's heart, including me.
　　
　　I don't usually have chances to do volunteer's work, but I have some creative ideas about it. In my opinion, helping others is a kind of volunteer and it is important to our lives. We can't become a volunteer in poor rural area, but we can help classmates sowe（solve） a math problem; we can't join the Olympics, but we can take part in a sports meeting in school and develope the spirit of “higher, faster, stronger” in other ways; we can't go to Wenchuan, but we can send our “gifts” there. In fact, we are volunteering everyday and everywhere, but we ignore it sometimes.
　　
　　Volunteer is not a simple matter about yourself, it also has great influence to your life, your family, even the world. If there are not volunteers any more, everyone is selfish and vain, the world will be a lonely place. Volunteer can bring people warm and kind feelings and help improve your personality. When you are volunteering, you'll find the beauty of the world and life and you really feel and touch some hard experience, it is able to lead you to treat your family, your life, your fridends（friends） more previously. My dad once told me a story: at the time of Beijing Olympic Games one year's flashback, some volunteers said that time was really a hard but valuable memory. Sometimes, they had to stand, it was not permitted to argue with tourists; sometimes, they even wanted to cry, but smiles had to be on theirs faces all the time. Volunteer was not an easy job, but they said that they didn't regret at all ―― they responded to China, they won reputation for our nation!
　　
　　So, volunteer is worth joining and valuing, though it is hard, you have gained the best award ―― a kind heart.
　　
　　Start your volunteer life now!
　　
　　專家建議：
　　
　　在不跑題前提下，內(nèi)容雖然重要，但關(guān)鍵是語(yǔ)言的包裝，建議多看些優(yōu)秀范文，和英文原著，增加語(yǔ)感，這樣文章會(huì)更傳神。
　　
　　專家點(diǎn)評(píng)：
　　
　　文章思路清晰，敘述條理清楚，但句子之間的銜接做得不夠，要多用連接詞。此外，應(yīng)多掌握一些詞語(yǔ)的同義詞，這樣避免重復(fù)。在句式變換方便也要多下些功夫。

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