關(guān)于虎媽的英語(yǔ)作文

關(guān)于虎媽的英語(yǔ)作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)專家：
趙秀鳳，中國(guó)石油大學(xué)外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)院教授、博士，全國(guó)英語(yǔ)創(chuàng)新大賽顧問委員會(huì)副主任，第十屆、第十一屆全國(guó)創(chuàng)新英語(yǔ)大賽評(píng)委。
參寒佳作
姓名：何姝婧
學(xué)校：襄樊市第五中學(xué)
成績(jī)：97
Have you ever heard about such a story?On [1] liffle eagle’ s[2] growing older andcovering [3] with shining feathers, old eaglewill cast it out of the nest. The little eagle learns[4] to fly due to the scare of death. However,when it’ s back home, old eagle breaks his chil-d’s bones of wings. Once recovering, the pooreagle will be thrown[5] again. Over and overagain, the wings of liffle eagle will becomemuch stronger. This land of training sees to it[6] that liffle eagle is capable of flying high inthe pure blue sky.
I guess you must be aware of the mean-ing of the story, that is, strict parenting way isalso a way of showing love, although this deeplove usually hides behind criticizing and toughfamily rules.
Shortly after my book, Baffle Hymn ofthe Tiger Mom, is published in America, it’saWarent that I have raised a storm amongAmericans[7], which is about the differencesof [8] parenting way between Clunese andAmerican. I’m on board with traditional Chin-ese parenting way mainly based on Confucius’s theory[9].
It is widely aclmowledged that Americanparents are qute mercy, for they give their chil-dren much freedom and space to create some-thing new, to have their personal life. But it alsocauses a problem that children may get into thehabit of being not so serious about their study.So you seeL[10], a growing number of Ameri-can parents are complaining about their child-ren’ s low marks. In addition, they don’t know,as a proverb runs, "You cannot sellthe cow anddrink the milk". Honey, what you should keepin nund is that no sweet without sweat. Onlywhen you welcome[11]the heavy rain bravelycan you eventually see the rainbow peep out be-hind the clouds!
Don’ t blame your tiger mother for herwicked, cruel and cold-hearted parenting way.Every time I push you towards the piano or the studying table, I cannot but feel hurt to face yourtears rounding in the eyes. I feel grulty to punish you when you don’t[12] get an A in exams [13].How hard it is for a mother to treat her child likethis! Albeit sad, I can’t stop doing these. Child-ren naturally prefer a free environment, so youwouldn’t be ready to work hard, which other-wise will waste your potential.
Maybe you’re dissatisfied with me, but I do hope you can appreciate whatl’ve done for　you. I merely lead you a bright road so that youwon’t go on a wrong direction, and there stillremains a long distance you need[14] to coverby your own energy, with nobody to countL[15]on. Believe in yourself! I’m looking forwardthat in the near future, I’Il have a chance topointL161 the headline of a newspaper, declareproudly," it’ s my daughter! "
Dear girl, you’re destined to be a great　woman like a tiger!
With all my love,
Tiger mom
批注系本期專家點(diǎn)評(píng)
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專家點(diǎn)評(píng)：
本期佳作從虎媽的口氣娓娓道來(lái)，全文有理有據(jù)，言辭激昂。本文蘊(yùn)含的感情較為細(xì)膩，對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)的描寫十分到位。作者詞匯量豐富，句式結(jié)構(gòu)較為復(fù)雜，符合書面語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣，當(dāng)然，作者仍需注意部分詞語(yǔ)的搭配和介詞的使用。

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